Tuesday, 24 November 2009

prologue page 2 pencils

So the publishers of a graphic novel I'm drawing for liked the initial sketches for characters and want to see a few finished pages. So I thought I'd post the initial pencils for one up here. Criticism and pickiness welcome! This''ll probably take me the rest of the week to finish. Except I have two days before a long weekend away. Ah well, best dust off that bottle of midnight oil! As usual, click on the image for a bigger version.

3 comments:

Emperor said...

I'm afraid I can offer no advice on improvements as it looks spot on (bearing in mind I haven't seen the script). Again I'm especially impressed by the facial expressions - it feels almost like sketches of real people and not fictional characters.

Also if it is all about the adventures of Johnny Vegas, Max Clifford and a giant alien penis then you have one guaranteed reader here!! ;)

Be sure to keep us updated of progress.

Kevin Levell said...

Lovely stuff. Your characters are spot on.

mygrimmbrother said...

What Emperor & Kev said. Pencilmonkeymagic indeed! You excel at this stuff...